Narrative writing: Homework- Orignial and exciting plots!

Dear All,

Here is a fantastic clip from the BBC that presents a really interesting plot and story.  Have a watch and then have a go at writing this story.  Focus on the structure and your use of verbs, adjectives and adverbs. 

http://www.bbc.co.uk/learningzone/clips/stories-nick-marriott/6530.html

This will be due for Monday 27/2/12

Miss Stark